The Draft

     While writing my research paper draft I found myself getting caught up in the film. I went a little overboard on the details of the scenes I am analyzing. I am still constantly looking for useful sources for my model. I was trying to find sources written about the Manchurian Candidate but wasn’t really able to find much that was helpful. I think V for Vendetta will be a good title to search for sources. Another problem I was having while writing my paper was figuring out how to organize my thoughts in fluid and constructive sentences. I found that I wrote in fragments and ideas rather than fluid, and clear sentences. Writing the draft was super helpful for me though, I think I have a great start and understanding for how I want to write my revised draft, what I need to work on more, and what I need to cut out of my paper.